Here are two edited versions of the essay that I asked you to edit last week. The first one shows all the changes that have been made. Anything in red italics has been added. The deleted material is written in red and struck out. I tried to base the essay on the original and keep as much of it as I could, but it was very difficult and the result is probably not as good as if I had just started from scratch.
The second version only shows the final material, but it uses different colours to show how the various themes flow through the essay.
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